Comments for alycehofe's Blog http://alycehofe.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Sun, 14 Dec 2008 17:44:15 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on Computer Game Essay – LRM 08-12-08 by mrslearmont http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/2008/12/08/computer-game-essay-lrm-08-12-08/comment-page-1/#comment-5 mrslearmont Sun, 14 Dec 2008 17:44:15 +0000 http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/?p=31#comment-5 Good Alyce, your essay shows developing analytical skills and uses appropriate media terms. GRADE - C TARGET - to improve your grade by making more detailed reference to texts in your answer ie. in-depth description of range of character choice in game and consideration of the representation issues raised by them. Good Alyce, your essay shows developing analytical skills and uses appropriate media terms.
GRADE – C
TARGET – to improve your grade by making more detailed reference to texts in your answer ie. in-depth description of range of character choice in game and consideration of the representation issues raised by them.

]]> Comment on Audience Theory Essay by mrslearmont http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/2008/10/23/audience-theory-essay/comment-page-1/#comment-4 mrslearmont Sun, 16 Nov 2008 21:56:04 +0000 http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/?p=22#comment-4 Attempts to apply audience theories to text and discusses events in the film. Target - some of your analysis of audience theories is confused, read over your notes and make sure you are clear on the basic explanation of each theory. Grade - D Attempts to apply audience theories to text and discusses events in the film.
Target – some of your analysis of audience theories is confused, read over your notes and make sure you are clear on the basic explanation of each theory.
Grade – D

]]> Comment on Preliminary Task by mrspaine http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/2008/10/22/preliminary-task/comment-page-1/#comment-3 mrspaine Thu, 13 Nov 2008 10:38:38 +0000 http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/?p=18#comment-3 Not a bad attempt Alyce, I liked that you tried to make your magazine seasonal and your analysis has some detail. T- Improve your use of photoshop for the next task as some of your cutting is a bit scruffy and you haven't always considered layout conventions. Not a bad attempt Alyce, I liked that you tried to make your magazine seasonal and your analysis has some detail.

T- Improve your use of photoshop for the next task as some of your cutting is a bit scruffy and you haven’t always considered layout conventions.

]]> Comment on Media Studies Homework by mrslearmont http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/2008/09/24/media-studies-homework/comment-page-1/#comment-2 mrslearmont Fri, 26 Sep 2008 12:43:27 +0000 http://alycehofe.edublogs.org/?p=11#comment-2 Very brief comment, does use approriate terminology. TARGET - use relavant examples from the media to illustrate your points Very brief comment, does use approriate terminology.
TARGET – use relavant examples from the media to illustrate your points

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